- Where it came from. Robert forwarded Josh Vigran’s note (Aug 23) with a shared Google Doc, Digital Flyer Feedback and Changes, gathered from Josh, Becky Key and Pastor Bobby Key. Their theme throughout: make it more concise, less scrolling. Applied in full to songs-and-stories.html.
- “Brighten the background photo and keep text off Becky’s face.” The hero was a full-bleed photo at 42% opacity under a navy gradient, with the headline centred straight over her. Rebuilt as a split hero — headline and tagline on the navy left, Becky at full brightness on the right with no scrim over her (only a feathered edge where the photo meets the navy). On mobile the photo sits on top and fades down into the text block. Cloudinary now serves the crop with g_face and e_brightness:12.
- Cuts they asked for. The kicker line (“An afternoon of music… good news of Jesus”) was called redundant — removed. The three “Music / Stories / Good News” boxes were called redundant — removed with their styles. The wordy intro and share paragraphs were replaced with their own wording, verbatim.
- “Who You’ll Hear” promoted to a full-size heading and “Three people, one afternoon” dropped — Josh’s point being that more than three people will be heard. Bios cut to name and role (Becky Key — singer & songwriter; Josh Vigran — Zion’s Music Director; Bobby Key — stories & message), photos kept, and the three cards now stay side by side on a phone instead of stacking. The Ephesians verse stays — they said they liked it.
- Net effect: section padding tightened and two full sections removed, so the page is roughly half its previous scroll depth. Verified with Playwright at 1400×900 and 430×932. Still noindex,nofollow until Robert says go.
- Open on this event: the URL question is unresolved — Robert asked to swap LIM for Zion in the link, Bill Slayden wants both ministries in it. Also outstanding from Robert’s Aug 17 note: an email description template and public service announcement copy for KJNP and other radio stations, plus Bill’s question about television announcements before local news.